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shine shine shine by ~bethaliz01:iconbethaliz01:

Categories Photography > Conceptual

©2005-2009 ~bethaliz01
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yup i am very tired so yeah enjoy!

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~expozure Apr 17, 2005, 5:02:01 PM
Variation of tones is good BUT the flare on the left side of frame is really taking the eye off a brilliant pic.
Crop it closer in.
Then you'll get a result.

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Photography...one second to take-a lifetime to admire.
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~bethaliz01 Apr 17, 2005, 5:04:02 PM
thankyou the glare is there on purpose its from a lens filter

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"if an original thought were to enter his head it would surely die of lonelyness(-ellain cunningham)"
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~expozure Apr 17, 2005, 5:13:53 PM
What catches your eye first though the glare or the intricate pattern of the chairs?

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Photography...one second to take-a lifetime to admire.
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~smashedspine Apr 17, 2005, 5:58:42 PM
I don't know if that flare on the side is intentional, but it adds a lot to the piece. Good job!
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~consumedwithhate Apr 17, 2005, 7:00:56 PM
Hmm, I really like this, but I think it would be better if it were more in focus. I think it would be more striking if it were more defined. :)

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~lullabies Apr 17, 2005, 7:56:18 PM
this is such a unique photo, i've never seen anything like it :) my only suggestion would be to up the contrast a little to bring out a more definition.

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Everything I tell you is a lie. Except that. And that. And that. And that.
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~stabbedbycupid Apr 18, 2005, 6:40:12 AM
I like the flare of light on the side, but you need to choose either to make that the focal point, or to make the chairs the focal point, right now it's kind of a distracted photo. I WANT THOSE CHAIRS!!! (just a lil side note lol)

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~bethaliz01 Apr 18, 2005, 10:50:52 AM
yah i was thinking of editing it so the flare is alittle smaller i think your right
yeah i loooove those chairs!!!!!!!

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"if an original thought were to enter his head it would surely die of lonelyness(-ellain cunningham)"
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~bethaliz01 Apr 18, 2005, 10:53:25 AM
thanks i did put in more contrast maybe i will do alittle more

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"if an original thought were to enter his head it would surely die of lonelyness(-ellain cunningham)"
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